WAR

O0o good points!!!! I totaly agree with you, it's really not necessary anymore (if it ever was at all)
Thanks for the comments!!
*CiaO* *5/5*

P.S. I would NEVER cut! Eww that's not me at all! yeah, I just entered contests and the motifs were saddness...I really am a very happy person! I do appreciate the concern! =]

This poem is incredibly moving!! I liked the message and i nearly cried!! (I probably would have done but my brother was in the room, and he would have lauged at me so much!)

Welcome to my favorites! lol....
Keep up the magnificent work your the
best.

Letty

Well Mr. John, Let me be the first to
congradulate you on you're spectacular
work. I have been commenting on a
lot of poems and let me tell you, that
your one of the best. Your work has
its own special style. Your able to get
your point across, tell a story, and
paint a picture perfectly, without
breaking the flow of your poem. Well
Mr. John, I have four words for you,
and I hope that you remember them.

Well Mr. John, Let me be the first to
congradulate you on you're spectacular
work. I have been commenting on a
lot of poems and let me tell you, that
your one of the best. Your work has
its own special style. Your able to get
your point across, tell a story, and
paint a picture perfectly, without
breaking the flow of your poem. Well
Mr. John, I have four words for you,
and I hope that you remember them.