Very very good!

Great poem. i relaly like it. it has great flow and word choice and eveyrhting. u have talent so keep on writing
take care
luve angie

Its unbelievable coz at ur age u write such a good poem

Great poem! I love the flow of it! And i really like the words you used. Its great! Keep them up!! xx

This is a good start...but it needs a lot of work...u need to work on lengthing your poems, and making them flow better.....u've got talent....but its gonna take some work....i appreciate it if u could comment on my poems
andi

It's really good for your age and it looks to me like you have a lot of potential so keep it up

Awesome poem, you spoke your feelings. I like poems where they come from the heart and not trying to make it rhyme and have and other stuff.

Tony :D love ya
(I always return the favor, thxs for commenting on my)

Aww i could see this unraveling before me as i read very good write!!!!!sooo sad but very good5/5
laura