Life

by nikkigirl23   Aug 17, 2006


Life
the problem of life
the difficulty of gangs
the policy of death awakes
the document of custody ignored
the crisis of success
the admiral love quality desired
your position in life
the physical acceptance of yourself
the potential success
the example of the ambulance is not a suprise
the efficiant company
the utnecil used on death
the garage in which you got shot in
the parrel life you lead
the ethical moral
life

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    It's a good poem and you have fantastic ideas, but change the style, no offence but it reads like a shopping list and all the 'the's become monotonous and predictable. tell more a story using these ideas because written correctly you can make the most amazingly powerful poem!

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