Solace

by Leah20   Aug 17, 2006


Water's a churning
The fields are a burning
The water's in over my head

Homes are a flooding
The people are running
Their lives are left in their stead

Cold solace is found
Safe underneath the ground
The bittersweet kiss of death

What is left of me
After the disease
Finally reveals all its wrath

Life's dissapating
I'm all but mistaking
Finality lies within my grasp

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  • 15 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Nice poem. it sounds as if it could be turned into a song.

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Short but well penned!!
    keep it up!!

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This poem was beautiful and very wonderfully written i really enjoyed reading it, you are a fantastic writer great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by SuicideNotes2Poems

    Omg i loved the way you set this poem up
    and once again i loved the word choice
    5/5 exilant job =]

  • 17 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    The imagery you use is very well used. The flow is consistant throughout the whole poem, and I loved the ending stanza - it pulled everything together. Much emotion behind each word, I defintely felt it. Good Job, I loved it.

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