Comments : When...

  • 18 years ago

    by LostForever

    I like it...its good well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Now this IS a poem. Very sweet too. It flowed really well...so you do know how to write a poem. I couldn't tell from the other poems I just read, they seemed just words in stanzas instead of a poem in stanzas. Keep it up and keep writing poetry instead of just words((if you get what I mean)).

    && Thanks for the comments...take care!