In Bed

by xxMagioxx   Aug 17, 2006


I lay down in bed
Feeling this pain
Thinking of being dead
Dying in vain

What hope do I have in life?
How useless I have become
I turn to my razor knife
Knowing my arm is numb

All I do is cry
Tear running down all night long
Puddles run down my eyes
Dreaming of a place where I truly belong.

I don't know if this poem is any good but plz comment even though it might be bad

Tony :)

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  • 15 years ago

    by letmedie2night

    Im so in love with your poetry your pain...i can see it from my point of view its like theres nothing left for us and our only friend is a blade ''we mend our wounds with blades'' love it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kally

    Awesome poem.. sounds alot like me
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by just*some*gurl

    Well written. really well written.
    "dreaming of a place where i truly belong..."
    isn't that what we all want. you just put it into words.
    tannis

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    I don't think it was bad at all. i really liked it. all of your poems are really good..you have a gift...if you never were to write again i'd truly miss it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Yo Tony....poem its not bad at all..i know how id feels just hang on there....time will come.....rachy

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