Tragically done. The morbid mood really thrills me. Keep it up! Love ya~Holly

"As thunder roars its angered song
And lightning strikes against the moon"

I absolutely love those lines. This poem is so full of passion. I really like it! The descriptions are wicked cool and it all flows together very nicely.

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

Man, I think I would like to see this place, other than in my dreams. Fantastic Jeannie. I love the mood it inspires. Tim

I loved this poem.. my favorite is the last line. Nice work, this put me in the mood to write some of my own dark poetry thank you very much.

I like this, very dark and mysterious. well done!

I think you have captured the essence of the mood. This is hauntingly beautiful. Well done. xx

Wow...great expressions in here. My friend recomended you and now I see why. I'll def. keep reading and rating your stuff. Great job!
~Jules

Good rhythem, and flow...
:) good work i loved it

A Very Nice Poem With Great Language and Imagery. Very Cool to Write a Poem About A Cemetary(is Is about a cememtary right?) The onyl thing i dont lke is how the first stanza's rhyme scheme doesnt match the rest., employ and blow dont rhyme... =\

Other than that definantly a great, dark, slightly creepy poem.

5/5!!

x.x:Lauren

*gasp* what can i say? this is absolutely great..

A really good haunting poem with amazing imagery and word choice. it flows very well and the structure is good. i'm guessing it was about a graveyard, but not sure, i thought all the words had connotations that made this poem very thought provoking.

Amazing imagery, almost like I was standing there. Excellent poem, written with good vocab. 5/5