Given up on you

by ButterflyKisses_xo   Aug 17, 2006


The days past slowly,(As I sit alone)
Waiting for the rain (Or you my love, to show)
The flowers begin to die(As I do deep inside)
They need there water(Or still they won't survive.)

[Bridge]
The cars pass me yet,
Like I'm standing still as stone,
Life moves on,
It's about time its me, not you.

[Chorus]
I've given up on you,And still it doesn't show
Your the half in me, It's still hard to let go.
It's because of you,These cheeks are stained with tears,
Because I never thought You'd leave me throughout the years

You gave me time to breath,
And trust was all we had,
And now you slip away,
It's finally time to say..

[Chorus]
I've given up on you (Oh ya)And yet it doesn't show,
Your the half in me, It's still hard to let go.
It's because of you, These cheeks are stained with tears,
Because I never thought, you'd leave me throughout the years.

[Bridge]
The cars pass me yet,
Like I'm standing still as stone,
Life moves on,
It's about time its me, not you.

I've given up on you,And now it finally shows,
Your the half in me, and you'll never fully go,
It's because of you, these cheeks are stained with tears,
Because I never thought, you'd leave me throughout the years..

Chorus.

Oh ya, I'm finally me, Not me and you...

Life flies bye (As my life moves on)
Watching the rain(It finally came today.
Now the flowers breath(As I do inside)
They need there water(Or still they won't survive.)

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  • 18 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Aww, that was awesome, my friend!I loved it, all the emotion in it, the rhyming...I wouldnt change a thing!It was very beautifully written.

    "...I've given up on you (Oh ya)And yet it doesn't show,
    Your the half in me, It's still hard to let go..."
    ^^I loved these lines!!
    Anyway, keep writing like that!Great style! 5/5
    Much love,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    If u need me im here for u 100% im urs for dispoasal!

  • 18 years ago

    by glass*wall*prison

    I got some awesome music that would go with that...wrote it on my acoustic the other day.

    Pretty awesome write.

    5/5