Comments : Given up on you

  • 18 years ago

    by glass*wall*prison

    I got some awesome music that would go with that...wrote it on my acoustic the other day.

    Pretty awesome write.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    If u need me im here for u 100% im urs for dispoasal!

  • 18 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Aww, that was awesome, my friend!I loved it, all the emotion in it, the rhyming...I wouldnt change a thing!It was very beautifully written.

    "...I've given up on you (Oh ya)And yet it doesn't show,
    Your the half in me, It's still hard to let go..."
    ^^I loved these lines!!
    Anyway, keep writing like that!Great style! 5/5
    Much love,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS