by Lauren Waszkiewicz Aug 17, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Thsi is a jingle-type thing, like for TV commercials, or whatever. it was for a contest, so im not /that/ weird. |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Haha. nice jingle type thing. |
Unlucky by random picking, I don't like funny poems. However, this is interesting, not funny though. Perhaps this should go under micellaneous? Anyways, nice job, a little short (I felt it could be longer.) Not too bad though, all in all. |
LOL!!!!!! Nice job.... thats great.. keep writting and all please comment my poems and rate them! ~DARK~ |
by Sweet lig
Hey its funny this is differ from others haha god bless |
by Goran Rahim
Hahaha, it was good, and you made me laugh. I think you have done a great job here.5/5 |