Hehe this is what got 2nd. great work, i really like this! 5/5

Hahaha, it was good, and you made me laugh. I think you have done a great job here.5/5

Hey its funny this is differ from others haha god bless

LOL!!!!!! Nice job.... thats great.. keep writting and all please comment my poems and rate them! ~DARK~

Unlucky by random picking, I don't like funny poems. However, this is interesting, not funny though. Perhaps this should go under micellaneous? Anyways, nice job, a little short (I felt it could be longer.) Not too bad though, all in all.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

Haha. nice jingle type thing.