Nice use of repitition.

Uh sorry but did you know that the words to this Poem are from a Ashley Simpson song called "Say GoodBye"

Its good though!!

Good job, but Robins right try to be your own, not saying that you arent and all but, you know what i mean, I still liked it alot. 4.5/5! comment on mine sometime-Meg

I love this poem it is very good