I loved every line, excellent piece of work 5 up!

I dont know if my comment sent through or not but im sending one again. Excellent piece of work 5 up!

Nice poem, for some reason it sounds familiar but still i like it

Depends on where you saw it for it to be familiar. It's traveled all over some poem sites, like "I love peotry" "Teenink" and even my website, www.grimsite.zoomshare.com. I asure you though that I am undenyablly the legitament owner.