Nature

by Tiny Reader   Aug 17, 2006


So many ways, so beautiful
is the garden that they share.
Pure blossom, sweet smelling flowers;
fresh grass cut to perfection
each blade standing tall.

Yet violent winds sweep through
where peaceful serenity lies.
Trees restless in unpredictable winters,
thrown side to side
with little care.
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If I had a share in the garden
winters would still come.
Yet I'd protect the flowers
and shield them from the sun.

So many ways so beautiful
is the garden that they share,
but it would be more beautiful
if it was me that was there.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I can feel this poem so beautiful while im reading i was imagine im in the garden and a lot of beautiful flowers and smell so good very nice poem... enjoyable..

  • 18 years ago

    by Tyler

    A beautiful poem, great work keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    I lik this one the most..it just makes me wnt to go outside and smell the flowers and go to the garden......and admire it...a 5/5 for me..

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Great descriptions

    I was wondering you were trying to do a rhyme theme. If you were, it would be if it was same throughout the poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Oh, wowee-- I loved the imagry in this piece. Very nice indeed. The flow was alright, didn't seem too rocky, But I did notice you switched from 5 lines in the first two stanza's to 4 lines in the last two, not sure if that was on purpose or not, but I liked it.

    Really good job, hun. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

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