Wonderful write Sarah... An amazing portrait of nature and winter. You write with such love and tenderness. A very tranquil piece that illuminates something other than nature to me. I find the careful traces of a love anthem in this poem. A great piece which I much enjoyed!

Oh, wowee-- I loved the imagry in this piece. Very nice indeed. The flow was alright, didn't seem too rocky, But I did notice you switched from 5 lines in the first two stanza's to 4 lines in the last two, not sure if that was on purpose or not, but I liked it.

Really good job, hun. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Great descriptions

I was wondering you were trying to do a rhyme theme. If you were, it would be if it was same throughout the poem.

I lik this one the most..it just makes me wnt to go outside and smell the flowers and go to the garden......and admire it...a 5/5 for me..

A beautiful poem, great work keep it up

I can feel this poem so beautiful while im reading i was imagine im in the garden and a lot of beautiful flowers and smell so good very nice poem... enjoyable..