This was a really good poem. but it was sad. Don't give up. Some people just can't show they care, but believe they do. Plz, Don't give up. i rate 5/5

Thats sad. i can elate to it. ur really good at writting. keep it up and stay strong. if ever u need to tlk. i'm here.
love willow xxo

Ok i just wrote u a commment but i accidently pressed the wrong button, n went bak, n now i have to write it again, so frustrating, neways as i was saying great poem, but its sad though,
but dont give up, dont be scared to fly alone, if you ever need sum1 to just slisten to u, u can tlk 2 me but i know u dont know me n u may think i wont listen but i will im good at listening, neways,
this is a long comment,
ima bounce now catchya
~kat~
take care

Great job. but like everyone else, don't give up! stay strong and things will work out.
kr

Awww=( That one is sad! I Care!! I realy really doo!! Don`t you ever doubt thatt!!=) I`ll always be there for you..(on msn as best as i can) hehe=)...Don`t give up Angg! Everyone lovess you very very much!! Evenn mee!!=) Great poem hunn! XoX Chelsss

Wow...........this poem is so deep and so much pain is in it...........dont worry about it honestly everyone goes through that feeling!!!

DNT GVE UP GRL

there are people out there in every1s life that does care ok it might seam like no1 does but grl believe me sum1 does care even if its only 1 person thats all we need.
dont give up dnt be scared to fight and live on!!

sad but amazing poem :)) like always

This is such a sad and touching poem. 5/5 the flow is nice. keep writing, u have so much potentialxxx

This poem is exactly how i feel :'((
can you email it to me reading things like this keeps me going, knowing that im not the only one who feels this way, i thank you sooo much for writing this in a way its helped me :'( thank you

So sad, but it flowed beautifully and was very well written. Nicely done.