Depression Just Won

by X~Angie~X   Aug 17, 2006


Its time for me
to say goodbye
this is my last time
but you still dont see
everyone thinks im fine
but I'm not
if I had a dime
for everytime someone thought
I was alright
I would be so rich
wouldnt that be a sight
There is a glitch
in my life
so I took a knife
to hopefully end the pain
but all I got was this crimson rain
its all over
theres no four leaf clover
Its time to go
I will die really slow
even though
I dont want
to leave so soon
everyone keeps on taunting
me to look up and see the moon
I cant because it is now time
My time is done
Depression Just Won

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  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Great read! Very sad yet i can relate to this. I hope your ok, you can talk to me whenever you like hun. I hope depression doesnt win. :(
    Ok about the poem i liked the flow of it, i thought that "if i hads a dime" was a tiny bit cliche. yet i klept on reading as you kept me hooked till the end. It was VERY emotional, and meaningful. A subjkect most of us can relate to some time in out life. It had a good rhyme sense, and none of them seemed to be forced.
    A good read! Thanks for your comment and keep writing!
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by aisyned

    Thats so sad!! but very good

  • 17 years ago

    by ~me~

    Wooooooow very good
    dont let it win
    be strong hunni
    feel free to P M me
    me x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by lana

    Wow girl thats so sad and hard
    but its a beautiful poem and i love reading your poems

    dnt let it win!!!
    your friends on here will help you through if you need someone to talk to im here

    keep your head up and try and smile:)

    lana

  • 18 years ago

    by josh-and-valerie-together-forever-and-always

    Check out my poems and comment plz

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