You killed me

by Darkend Angel   Aug 17, 2006


Stuck in neutral
nowhere to go
You broke my heart
and now it shows

You said you loved me
but why did you leave
you said you understood me
but you will never see
the way I felt when you hurt me

It feels like knifes running through my heart
the pain never ends
and this is just the start

I feel the room spinning
the shadows come closer
darkness fills my eyes
pools of blood I cry

Feeling the pain
running through my veins
blood pouring out
I want to shout

You have played with my heart
one to many times
the game is over
you've crossed the line
screaming to my death
the pain is so real
you hurt me
so now you must deal

My mom found me on my bedroom floor
but it was to late
I've already entered hells gates

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    This is good.
    there is one thing you could work on

    your rhythm could be better.

    other then that your stroyline was really interesting and you showed emotion throughout the poem.

    4/5
    ~emah

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