I liked this poem, but you could work on your flow a little bit. It's kind of repititious as well, but other than that, great work! :)

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I love it

I love this poem. Great depth and emotion. It was well written... Good job!! 5/5

~Shae

That was so sad yet very sweet. The emotion was clear and very strong, and the descriptions were great. this is heartfelt and well written over all

That is really good!!! who did this to you?

Aww this poem is so sad. i think u did a great job on this one.loved the emotion once again. 5/5 keep up the good work.

Aw,this was sad.
Very touching.
Very well written.

~Chelsea

Beautifully touched my heart. Well done.5/5

Wow...i had a similar experiencee myself...