5/5! comment on mine- Meg

Wow thats awesome!
really well written and flowed great
it reminds me of someone i know so much lol..

keep it up 5/5

please comment on my poem beautiful tragedy.. if you want to hehe.. xoxo

Awh, wow, girl.. That was amazing and sooo sad.. I think you should have called it "I'm weak.. I'm weak" though.. But your decision, lol.. The flow in this was off but your powerful descriptions and emotion kind of made up for that.. Also, there were a few places where you were missing a word or two.. This can all be fixed by just reading over your work once you're finished.. Nice job though 5/5