Very beautiful. i hope everything gets better for you. dnt forget to tell him u love him, cause one day he wnt be there to say it back. keep faith, adn i'm here if u wanna talk.
love willow xxoo

Wow. My dad lives in another state, and im living with my mom. What u said in your poem is exactly how I feel about my dad. I hope everything works out with him. I hope my dad grows up. Keep in touch and tell me how u r wit ur dad. I can give some good advice, and I ma open for some too. All dads have good intentions, It's just a matter if they follow through.

Ella

WOwo .. I def see were ur comin form i have the same problem :(

A beautifully written piece.I feel blessed to have a dad like mine ,but I do know what its like not to have a dad at all ,for my eldest sons dad left before he was born ,then about 3 yrs ago my son decided he wanted to know his dad ,surprisingly he too wanted to meet my son and they have stayed in touch and get on ok ,but my son has said he does not think of him has a dad just a friend.

...This poem really means a lot to me. Just last night I cried myself to sleep thinking about my dad. And here, I can read these words and let them really sink in...
Congratulations, you have created a masterpiece!

Babe that poem is beautiful
i dnt no my father, but i wish i did
to be honest that poems sums up everythin i wanna say to my dad
goodluck
abi
xxx