Living Hell

by A New Beginning   Aug 18, 2006


Up you rise
From when you fell
Your life is all lies
In this living hell

Again you fall
And you begin to yell
But no one hears your call
In this living hell

Tears pour from your eyes
Your body is an empty shell
Each day more of you dies
In this living hell

You are falling apart
And no one can tell
But you knew from the start
In this living hell

You are out of luck
And your life will never go well
Now you are forever stuck
In this living hell

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  • 18 years ago

    by .x.HauNt.x.Me.x.

    This is very good!
    it would be a great song! hehe. .
    keep it up xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Anthony Newsome

    And again I say...this one reminds me of myself, and it IS A VERY GOOD POEM! Your poems are better than mine...and you told me that yours sucked.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Great job, I kinda feel like that right now. Thanks for your sincere comment...by the way, did you actually read that entire poem?? loL, it was long.