Hey, for being new in writing poems you're really good!
I'm still reading the rest of your poems, but I love this one.. It was really long though! Had me sat here for a while anyway.
If the world was mine I think it would be a little different from yours. But I did like some of your decisions and some of the points you made.
Thanks for the poem it's great.
Keep it up.
xXx Natalie xXx