by Anonymous Aug 18, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I love this ice cream, I absolutely do. |
by stefanie
I like this one. its well written. and i like how you compared it to ice cream :) great job |
by Anonymous
Hi lashes, thanks for your opinion. It was helpful. But I won't use your example, because I believe tightening it up would take out some of the emotion supposed to be displayed in this poem. If you come back and see that there's little to no changes in the poem, I just hope you see this comment. ^^; |
by lashes
I will vote at a later date if thats ok. |
by lashes
HI you said you wanted critique so i will give my opinion |
Wow.. this poem was written very well... |