by Louis Aug 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I'm standing here alone, with a knife and a broken heart. I've burnt through so many cigarettes to get here. I'm drowning in the city. I can barely stay afloat. What am I suppose to do without you? I have nothing else, you were all I had. All I ever wanted. Everything is so pointless. |
by Aline
Well i liked it more than the first, u should have more powerfu words and try using some rhymes |