My sore [Monorhyme]

by Nelle   Aug 18, 2006


You are whom I adore
Without you my heart is tore
You looked at my arm and saw my sore
I fell straight to the floor
You ran out and closed the door
You ended up hurting me more
You were so sad, that you swore
You left me just like before

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A Monorhyme is a poem in which all the lines have the same end rhyme.
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  • 18 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    Without you my heart is tore
    You left me just like before!
    I think that almost everyone can relate to this poem and I really enjoyed it! I LOVED IT!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, wow, that was excellent! I loved this onee.. The flow was good, the rhymes all worked really well, and the descriptions and emotion was wonderful! Great job, Ily. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, it was an ok poem. Awww Nelle, you are having a really bad writer's block. Haha, I guess we're in the same boat, but at least you are still writing something.

    PS. I really think your smile is pretty :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awe! This was sad. :[

    Very nicely done though. I'm glad that you're trying out different styles, and most of them I've never even tried, so yesh. One day {Keyword: one day} I'll try them. tehe. You did a great job on this one hun. Loved it! Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

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