Stained {Lanturne}

by Natalie   Aug 18, 2006


-------------------Tears,
----------------Streaming,
----------------Constantly,
----------Down my cold cheeks,
------------------Stained.

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Lanturne: A type of poetry in which when
it is centered, it resembles the Japanese
lantern. It has a strict syllable pattern of 1, 2, 3, 4, 1.
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  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    Descriptive, emotional, brilliant! That's all I have to say really!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Wow
    5/5
    its short but very good.

    I like this different style instead of the same old stuff abab rhyming or abcb rhyming

    I hope you understand
    I thought it was very good espeacially cause its original.
    ~Emah

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow awsome never heard of Laturne...u made in perfect words....i lik it alot a 5/5 for me..

  • 18 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    Wow that was one of the best japanese lanturne poems I have ever read.. infact I think its the first! It has a lot of meanign which is surprising for being so short.. good work :D

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey ive never heard of this kind of poem before, but ive really enjoyed reading this! great job 5/5 love mel

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