Priceless

by Wings Of Flames   Aug 18, 2006


A prayer for a soul tonight,
I plead your happy now,
The darkness of the cloth I bare,
For you I'll always bow,

I hold the rose above your coffin,
Its timber golden brown,
I let it fall to your new bed,
May you fix your broken crown,

The preist has spoken his last,
A hush falls from the crowd,
I rest my head upon my knees,
I shall always be so proud,

You're lain upon the dirt of Gods,
Our hearts tied upon crimson petals,
I worship your words and your care,
But maimed when my heart settles,

I cry this darkness through my eyes,
And try to believe the unreal,
Bringing back memory lane,
Where there's nothing left to feel,

I leave you to rest with angels,
And find my way back to the black,
This monumental moment,
I lift my head of slack,

Taking the silver bullets,
One, then two, then three,
For you my friend I've given,
A priceless gift for free.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    This was an amazing poem, it flowed really well and your emotions showed!
    Great job
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    This poem was amazing.

    "I hold the rose above your coffin,
    Its timber golden brown,
    I let it fall to your new bed,
    May you fix your broken crown,"

    Oh my goodness were those lines ever so powerful. You're very talented, I love your work already, and that is only the second poem I have read of yours. 5/5 =]

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, a great one.
    this poem is one of the poem that you want to read it over and over. great job done, i really like it specially the way you ended the poem
    For you my friend I've given,
    A priceless gift for free.

    it is so great written.
    take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    I like the way u kept the poem going but still having the same emotion

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Wow...Very wonderfully written. Simply lovely...Not as good as the other, but diffenately right there with it. You're amazing with explaining death. Great job.
    Definately not a 4.0 poem. Just keep your head high and know you're a great writer.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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