Very neat emma. happy 100! lol. i'm so glad i've been there from the beginning ; )
xox

Ok...I gave you a 4/5. I just recently have lost someone who was wuite close to me. Actually I went to his funeral today =( But I thought this was more of a story sort of...just in different lines. I also don't quite understand the last stanza. Maybe it's just me, but it might not be. =) xoxo

Samantha

Wow great work! loved the detailing. keep up the great work! 5/5 loved everything.

I cry this darkness through my eyes,
And try to believe the unreal,
Bringing back memory lane,
Where there's nothing left to feel,

^^I really liked that stanza, it was written beautifuly.

You also had a really strong ending, well, in my opinion you did, and I really liked that. Excellent job. Keep it up.

Natalie``

Wow...Very wonderfully written. Simply lovely...Not as good as the other, but diffenately right there with it. You're amazing with explaining death. Great job.
Definately not a 4.0 poem. Just keep your head high and know you're a great writer.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I like the way u kept the poem going but still having the same emotion

Wow, a great one.
this poem is one of the poem that you want to read it over and over. great job done, i really like it specially the way you ended the poem
For you my friend I've given,
A priceless gift for free.

it is so great written.
take care.

This poem was amazing.

"I hold the rose above your coffin,
Its timber golden brown,
I let it fall to your new bed,
May you fix your broken crown,"

Oh my goodness were those lines ever so powerful. You're very talented, I love your work already, and that is only the second poem I have read of yours. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

This was an amazing poem, it flowed really well and your emotions showed!
Great job
5/5