by goddess-glamourpuss Aug 18, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Though some are rather arrogant |
by Jenni Marie
Awwh, I thought this one was really sweet. |
by Edward D Zurovec
This is a great little poem.I really liked the flow and wording5 |
Here's to the artists, may they keep making something of something else till the end of time. |
You use "thee" and "thy" and yet use "your" also. Kind of a clash in writing style there, IMO. I'd use one or the other consistently if I was you, and going by the pace of the poem, probably change "your" to "thy". Just a thought. |
by Aline
U showed the importance of ur GOD, u showed how powerful how meaningful he is, not only for you, but for all of us. i liked it, actually i LOVED it |