This poem is awesome! i reallyyy like it, excellent job! *5 |
Hey!!..awsome poem.. I read this + ur profile and I found them both similar to how I feel most of the time..it's nice to know sometimes that ur not alone =) anyways.. it's definitely 5/5.. |
by xxmichaelxx
Weird, but really GREAT! thankz for the comment |
by Amberinaa
One word. |
by xxmichaelxx
Hey can u be one of the contest's judge in my new contest...like can u comment and vote to the ppl who'll win? thankz |
Wow that was amazing...I really loved it. I feel like this all the time...I can really relate. Beautiful write. |
by Midnight Sun
That was pretty awesome and totally sad. I really loved it. 5/5! |
by Esther
This is a wonderful poem... you clealy have a lot of talent! |
by AntiSocial16
"The cold ice surrounds me |
by Melanie
I can so relate to this poem. It's awsome the way you write |
This poem was great! Hey i got a question do you REALLY feel what you write when you write your poemz just asking. |
by Jenni Marie
Wow! Very powerful and filled with meaning, excellent flow. I loved it. |
by DragonGirl
Very very good! I liked to hear more stuff like this! |
by Melanie
I really love this poem that you wrote its good 5/5 no doubt!! |
by CY GINDLE
Deepppppppp wowwwwwwwww you got to read a poem by koriey korupped called |
by linkhorizon
Enjoyed this piece very much, especially because it's still something i relate to. i love the way you executed those last few lines that changed the flow and rythm from the stanzas. it really did make me pause and think :) another brilliant one. love and peace always. |
I really like this, especially these lines: |