Comments : Nothing more, Nothing less

  • 18 years ago

    by Kailynn Makenna

    This poem is awesome! i reallyyy like it, excellent job! *5

    xX-Katherine-Xx

  • 18 years ago

    by velvet kissesâ„¢

    Hey!!..awsome poem.. I read this + ur profile and I found them both similar to how I feel most of the time..it's nice to know sometimes that ur not alone =) anyways.. it's definitely 5/5..

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Weird, but really GREAT! thankz for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    One word.

    AMAZING!

    :D

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Hey can u be one of the contest's judge in my new contest...like can u comment and vote to the ppl who'll win? thankz

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Wow that was amazing...I really loved it. I feel like this all the time...I can really relate. Beautiful write.
    5.5
    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    That was pretty awesome and totally sad. I really loved it. 5/5!
    ~Jules

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    This is a wonderful poem... you clealy have a lot of talent!

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    "The cold ice surrounds me
    In body and heart
    The frost in my voice
    Can pierce like a dart"

    this stanza i really connected with. but i absoultey loved the whole poem. and so many people can relate, me included.
    please keep writing and try to stay safe, strong, and healthy
    *AntiSocial16*
    ps...thanks for the comment on my poem "Damaged" i appreciated it

  • 18 years ago

    by Melanie

    I can so relate to this poem. It's awsome the way you write

  • 18 years ago

    by Lov3 the Lord your God

    This poem was great! Hey i got a question do you REALLY feel what you write when you write your poemz just asking.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow! Very powerful and filled with meaning, excellent flow. I loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by DragonGirl

    Very very good! I liked to hear more stuff like this!

  • 17 years ago

    by Melanie

    I really love this poem that you wrote its good 5/5 no doubt!!

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Deepppppppp wowwwwwwwww you got to read a poem by koriey korupped called
    8:11 its got your name all over it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    Enjoyed this piece very much, especially because it's still something i relate to. i love the way you executed those last few lines that changed the flow and rythm from the stanzas. it really did make me pause and think :) another brilliant one. love and peace always.

  • 15 years ago

    by Behind Blue Eyes

    I really like this, especially these lines:
    "My cold outer shell
    Is just to protect
    From those that before
    Did nothing but attack
    So now when you see me
    Walking by
    Pause and remember
    There are reasons why"
    love this part!

    great job =)