A Moment Like This..

by ! CLAIREEE.   Aug 18, 2006


My heart thumping faster
as it skips a beat
inside blood running
from my head to my feet

This is the moment
of dignity and truth
It's the celebration of heaven,
the uniting of youth

eyes stray upon me
it's my turn to shine
although i'll mess up
and cross that broad line

There's no way we'll continue
with smiles on our faces
Why am i here?
of all moments and places

Just breath and relax
but even thats hard to do
can you believe these emotions
from just talking to you...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dutch

    Well written, good bodied poem.
    Im not into rhyming, but i love reading people's whose poems do rhyme.
    I loved it, 5/5.
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww. I feel like this sometimes lol. It's a great feeling to have. And it was expressed well in this. The flow was excellent, and it fit perfectly, and the rhymes were not too bad. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Hmm... I didn't really get this poem... Whered the blood come from? Otherwise nice write. The rhyming was really good in itself, though I really don't know how I can explain that to you without sounding cheezy... nice job, just didn't get the message, sorry.

  • 18 years ago

    by ImagineMe&You

    Really cool poem, rhymes well and everything, Keep writing! =)

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