Another great poem by you. I enjoyed reading it, great job
5/5

That was some really nice reading. Such a quality piece of art. :)

Oh my I loved this.
The repetition you used works very well. It keeps a consistancy going throughout the happenings of your poem. I like the idea of an 'ocean of memories' it gives the words meanings and structure with a priceless rhyme scheme that you always seem to perfect :D

Love and smiles
Sondos