I can definitely relate to this alot. and I just loved how you ended it with the same stanza. i think it brought the whole thing together 10 times more. it was wonderful but sad at the same time. great job babe. 5/5

Awe, wow. Jessy! This was so sad. Loved how you repeated the same stanza at the start and finish. T'was great!

You had a great flow aswell, and the rhyming didn't seem forced AND I loved your choice of wording.

A very well written emotional piece. Keep it up! Ily. 5/5

Natalie``

Very well written Jessy. I really liked this poem. You described everything well, and the words created an atmosphere of sadness. Wow, it was great. Seemed short, but it was still good :)

Wonderful work.
very sad.
loved the repeated stanza had a great effect.

keep up the good work!

sophie:)

Great job. Weight means TOO much to people nowadays.

Awwwwww...thts sooo sad...i lik it.. a 5/5 again!! ur really good poet..

SO sad! i hope the girl in the poem is not you, if it is and u need to talk im here, kk?
love mel

Aww amazing. i can relate to this!!! wonderful write. wow you really can write, so dont everr stop. this is sad but it is excellent!

Wow, my life story.
definitly can relate alot.
it brings back alot of memories
Very very good.
so sad,
i loved it.
amberinaa*

I really like this poem. I givve it a 5/5

It would mean a lot if you would check out and comment on my poems. Thx. :)

That was amazing!!
So touching and real.

Awwh...thats sad...i can relate well though...i went through something like that...i loved it though...5/5!! great job

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Gr8 poem. it has alot of emotions. rythme gos nicely. keep writing

Its a good peom..but somethings not right with the flow of it..its not very natural..but its still good. very sad..whats with you writting about fat people, huh? this better not be about you.! lol. anyways..good poem. but maybe work a little more on the flow of it.