Optimism (A Motivating Anthem)

by Bhavin   Aug 18, 2006


We may or may not live tomorrow
We may have to face unseen sorrow
We mail fail inspite of umpteen times try
We may feel sad by seeing others cry.

Tomorrow has been seen by none
Afterall, life isnt only to taste fun
So why should 'tomorrow' make us think
As someday for sure our sorrows shall sink.

So let us try to break this jinx
And be as unconquered as the Sphinx
Let us battle with others criticism
And wait for tomorrow with optimism...

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This one is for all my friends on this site which include Shobhana Kumar (Ya... She will always be on top of my list... because she is the real sculptor who mould me....), Goran, Sondos, Kaylee, Natalie, Kristy, Gary Sir, Angela, Farah, Stormy,Steven Beasley Sir, Sunny, Cuddles... and the list goes on... (By the way, I am missing Meena's poems... I cannot forget her too for encouraging me to write good poems...)
Thank you for motivating aspiring poets like me with your poems. Now its time for me that I motivate others to live life optimistically through this poem...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    A beautiful beautiful piece.
    I feel so close to you through your poetry even though we hardly know each other. This was oozing with originality, a sensible and safe rhyme scheme and could be put to music in fact (i think;) and it works well. You have cheered me up for I was feeling pretty low recently. Thank you for your mention, it means a hell of a lot

    Speak up for what you have to say
    Love Always
    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Very motivational and inspiring. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by the pale queen of the silent night

    Waw...u can truely write...this anthem is amazing..its speaks for those who do not speak it....its truely a great poem,,keep the wonderful work up...

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    A powerful message within your words... thank you for sharing them with me!

    And thanks for your beautiful comment on my poem. I am not leaving the site entirely, I shall pop in and out and will definitely keep on reading your writes. You have some amazing talent, don't ever give up, keep on writing. PM me anytime!

    Much love, peace and happiness to you. Keep on smiling..... Angela

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