Heart's [Senryu]

by Nelle   Aug 18, 2006


Heart's are delicate
They are not meant to be whole
They will break one day

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Senryu is a Japanese writing consisting of three unrhymed lines of (5/7/5) or 17 syllables in all. it is normally writing in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions. they posses no references to the natural world and stand out from nature/seasonal haiku
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  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    So true and so succint, well done onsticking to the format of this difficult structure

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very true poem. Good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very profound

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wowee-- hun! This was great. For such a short little poem, you've put so much emotions into it. A very lovely job! Keep it up!! Ily. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    This is true.. they will break one day

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