Hey
is this JonBenet Ramsy?
poor girl she didnt deserve to die so young!
love mel

Oh, how sad. but very beautiful. I just loved this poem. *hugs*

A very sweet poem for a loved one, I assume. I'm not sure how to explain how I feel about this poem, though, but I did love how you wrote it. You've always been an amazing writer.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

SO sOrRy fOr hER losT.......sHe waS sO yOuNg.......bUt gOD dIdN"T tAkE hEr cAuSe wAnTeD tO gOd tOoK hEr cAsUe hE nEeDeED a lItTlE gUrL aS aN aNgEl.....*In Loving Memory of JonBenet*

Wow.. this was a sad poem that kinda puts reality in your face.. i feel so bad about JonBenet or for any child whos life was taken away so shortly. I think you are a wonderful writter and should keep on writting because it will take you very far.- comment on mine sometime- Meg

Wow, a very great poem.so sad, but you showed great emotion.
I enjoyed reading it, 5/5

Sad poem but nicely written... i liked it too much, the flow, the rhythm are great, the vocab so expressive...Really a wonderfull poem...
Keep it up Darien...

This was really good. I liked your descriptions and how closely related it was to the JonBenet story. Beautifully detailed.

Nice poem... that part really caught mee [In her little blue dress covered in flowers
Soon to be buried in a couple of hours
Family and friends mourn her death
No one could recall her one last breath] well loved it...5=5

Wow... Just as what i wanna read over and over again.I dont know why "death" has just a big impact on me... only God knows why.
I wondered what compelled you to write this very wonderful poem>>> really inspiring and there's something mysterious about it that i like the most.

This is a really sad & touching poem..youre a great writer... 5/5

Awesome poem

I love your imagery. You create very vivid images. I think that makes the most powerful poetry.

That was an amazing piece. I loved it and I am glad that there nightmare is ending with the capture of the killer. Keep up the good work

OH MY GOSH! i sooo cried....so powerful! i loved it!

OH MY GOSH! i sooo cried....so powerful! i loved it!

This is a great poem and the flow is excellent although i would have not connected it with any particular person I think it is great that you kept it general
Iit is a great trubute to an inncent victim

great trhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

This one touched my heart. I must say much much better than my poem "He was a bit late" This one has truly touched my heart. Keep writing great stuffs like these ones and I promise to keep visiting your pages. 5/5 without any doubt.

Yet again another amazin poem from you. great job as always. very deep and fulled with sadness and the flow was amazing great job 5.5

This made me cry. It's amazing. I couldn't help but think of my best friend who was hit by a car outside my house. I watched her die. It reminded me of her funeral. I thank you for giving me another opportunity to think about her. You've inspired me.