I loved you like no one will ever will

by xxmichaelxx   Aug 18, 2006


Hey peeps. sorry i haven't wrote any poems and comment urs. it's cuz I've been out. (meaning vacation) just came back yesterday. thanks........

hey baby, hear me now

i loved you, like no one will ever will
it was my real deal
i loved you and wanted to make you happy
whenever you feel so goddamn crappy
i didn't care when you yelled at me
because i knew you just couldn't see
but then you will
and feel
this love I'm trying to give you
i would try everything i could do
i won't give up
i won't stop
i tried everything
by repaying me, you did this cruel thing
you broke my heart
tore it apart
made me feel all the things you felt
when no one ever wanted to help
you weren't supportive
that's what i received
from all the hard work i made for you
all i wanted was you to love me too
is it really that hard to give?
i didn't want you to leave
i made the sacrifices
as your love for me less
while you fell in love with another guy
you haven't even talked to or say hi
all he's going to do
is break your heart in two
will you really trust some guy
he'll just say bye
trust me i know
right now i feel so low

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem was good!, Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    I have no idea what stupid person would rate this 1.0. their stupid. i give it a 5.0 good work! ill be keeping an eye on ur work, because, in my opinion, u write great poems.

    -steph

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Thx adrian....at lest u said it gentler than nick did..he said tht he would not care if i killed myself....tht really hurt me...but i think u said it in perfect words....i guess i did deseve it then....and ur a awsome friend..

    so u went to San Metao...awsome!! wat did u do there and i would b tired 2...but wat part of cali ru from??

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awww....tht one is really sweet i liked it and where did u go 4 vaction..i hope tht u had fun...