Awww....tht one is really sweet i liked it and where did u go 4 vaction..i hope tht u had fun...

Thx adrian....at lest u said it gentler than nick did..he said tht he would not care if i killed myself....tht really hurt me...but i think u said it in perfect words....i guess i did deseve it then....and ur a awsome friend..

so u went to San Metao...awsome!! wat did u do there and i would b tired 2...but wat part of cali ru from??

I have no idea what stupid person would rate this 1.0. their stupid. i give it a 5.0 good work! ill be keeping an eye on ur work, because, in my opinion, u write great poems.

-steph

This poem was good!, Great job!