My Suicide Story

by ShatteredGirl   Aug 18, 2006


"This is it!" she writes on her note
im going to leave forever
her suicide letter marked with tears and cold blood
she's found in her room with a slit throat
her mother screams and her father cries
people sit in confusion and ask why?
her blood it stains their hearts forever more
her tragic death hurts their mind and soul
she watches them from above
as her brother takes his life cause he cant handle the pain
whats left in their world.... sadness and hate
taking one life destroys many other
think before you speak
speak before you act!

*i know its not great but its my way of telling my story*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    It's not amazing but it is great every poem that has a meaning is great and i really liked this one. well done

  • 18 years ago

    by ariana

    I wanna know your story

  • 18 years ago

    by Evie

    Your right when you say it's not great... but hey I'm not great eather.... I like the way that you do't leave anything out...even in a short poem where things can go wrong...but speak before you act? I think you should have left it at think before you act....but thats just me... 4/5 keep writing, thats the only way to get to the top

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