The Day I Fell (The Key)finished

by RadianceInReverse   Aug 18, 2006


A Key was found
that freed my mind
from the captivity of pain, disgrace

A Lock was discovered
that held in the relief
safeguarding the happiness of my heart, love

You Helped me escape
the forces of deep shadows
that ripped apart all glimpses of light
pushing me back into my cave

You Helped me capture
the feelings of righteousness
that put together my lonesome life
giveing me back a truthful smile

A sunrise without regret
and a night without faithlessness
a dream that came true
that day I fell in Love with You!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    Good use of emotion, I could feel it you changed up the number of lines in your verse in the middle but the way it went from three to four and just kinda moved up worked well I liked it