That was awesome...i kno exactly where ur coming from thats wut i wouldve said if i could arrange words in such a way as you can. i did write a poem called "my take on the first day of school" tho...school is evil and full of cunniaving bIt(he$ so yah...but i espacially liked the middle parts when u put it so bluntly in a humorous/ serious way. great job...
love ya lots,
sore