by Cynthia n Becky Aug 19, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I wish you'd come back, |
Good Job. this poem shows talent, even though it looked like you were gonna rhyme through the whole poem then you zoned away from the ryhme and it kinda is a weird flow for the poem, but good work. 4.5/5-- comment on mine sometime-- Meg |