Hey i really like this!! im going through the same thing!!
U great the way u expressed urself through this and giving it a good rythmitic pattern!
Nicely done darls
But i am soory you r going through this!
If ya ever need someone to talk to im always hear! And tht poem helped me coz i know tht someone is going through teh same thing!
Check out my poems if ya wish
Love Regie*

Good poem. The uneven lines and lack of spaces makes it hard to read..which is bad. You can improve by making the lines more even and putting the poem into stanzas and not just writing with never once pressing enter.

Well I think this poem had a good story to it and the rhyming was okay but it didn't have a flow.

P.S. I'm not trying to downgrade ya poem, I'm just trying to give you constructive criticism and help you become a better writer. Take Care!

&& you can comment on my poems anytime, it will be greatly appreciated and the more you comment on mine, the more I comment on yours.

I understand some of what you wrote i use to cut and still do, it was worse a while back but it is the way to deal with pain most people dont think so though,
good work 5/5

F*k this is awesome!!!
plz return the favour!!! plz read let it bleed its my best poem!!! this rocks!

Holy crap i understand this poem soo well.i cut too.. so i know what ur goin thru.. this is like an amazing poem and i love it. it makes me very sad tho. it has great rythm and flow and everything. keep on writing.. great poem
take care
luve angie

GREAT POEM_

I LOVE IT II MA GOING THRU THE SAME KIND OF STUFF BUT WHEN I MOULD WRITE POEMS THEY NEVER EXPLAINED IT JUST AS GOOD AS YOU DID

***THANX***

Dear hellsgirl,
I just wanted you to know that I am 18 yrs old, and I've been cutting for eight years. You're not alone and by your poem I see you already know that. I've been hiding it from everyone since the day it started, but on here you can totally be yourself and no one will mind. I know when I first came out about my cutting it was also on here, and no one judged me. Just know that if you need to talk we're here.
Svandyke615@hotmail.com
Sincerly,
Left_2_Die

Yep im going through it to im 15 and started 13, good poem 5.5

leah xx

Omg thts the best it i can totally relate i mean its lik everybody can be there for you but u still feel alone but gosh tht peom is the best love it!!!