Lol, i liked it. It was nice to read a funny one on here for once that actually was worth my time. Keep up the good work. 5/5 :)
-Jenna xo

Baby I wanna…
Oh, that could get lewd.
What a nice pair of…
Damn! That sounded crude
^^
My absolute favorite part .....
Great write Mark ! You put some giggle in my day ...

WOW!! real funny, loved it!! 5/5

You made me laugh..always a good thing. Funny and clever..i like smart humor. (its harder)

Wow, omg. it's so funni.

I really liked this,women do make it hard on you guys ,having to come up with all those lies can`t be easy. Just kidding . this was really funny.

Lol..that was hilarious! nice job 5/5:)

My favorite part is the past parigraph... "Nothing lasts forever, we dont have to fight, i'll always loveyou... atleast for tonight." its beautful... so comment mine sometime.
-Marina...

Thats so kewl I like your poem and how did you come up with something that relate sto so many people.

HAHAHAHA! the first 2 stanzas were very funny! I loved this poem! 5/5

Haha! Nice one, Mark.

Another great one, very funny

Omg i liked that that was really good 5/5

I really liked this poem.
Lough out loud poem.
Very well done.
..xx

Lol!! Thats hilarious :D

Very funny, clever and realistic. Thanks for the laugh!

Haha :D Excellent :D It was funny and light yet slightly sentimental at the same time :D I loved 'I think fluffy thoughts that could knock of your socks but each time I speak the fluff turns to rocks', I probably misquoted quite badly there as I was doing it from memory so sorry about that. It's such a good metaphor though :D Loved it loved it loved it :D