Wow...that's all i can say...it's so wonderful i don't know what to say...it will put what ever comment i have to shame...i...wow...

One of the very few that I say are original. A great write in every way. Simply a 5/5.

Brilliant. I can't say much more than that. Just wondering though, is it a work of ficiton or is it based on fact? Either way, excellent poem.

Great flow of words and incredible imagination.. The image you potray creates vivid imagery and captivating story...

An amazing read... 5/5!