by Marcus Aug 19, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Every day I smile and hide my pain with laughter. |
by Chris
So, i won't lie... you said you wrote raps so when i read this, i tried rapping it in my head. haha. but, i can't rap so that didn't really work. but either way, amazing poem. |
by Sandra D
I really like this, i can totally relate to every word! there wasn't tht much of a flow, but sall good, cause it seems to be telling a story... great job!!! 5/5! (now im gonna read the alternate ending) |
by Robie Lincer
This is another nice poem! yet sad! |
by LadyPearl
Great job. I can easily relate to this poem. |
Good poem...one little spelling thing.."my self" isnt two words..its just one "myself"....anyways.,.just pointing that out...not too important...the poem its self was a bit distracting cause of the long sentences and because of that the flow seemed a bit off...but the words were beautiful and the meaning was nice:):) |