Great job. I can easily relate to this poem.

Check the word "myself" in the last line.

This is another nice poem! yet sad!

keep it up!

I really like this, i can totally relate to every word! there wasn't tht much of a flow, but sall good, cause it seems to be telling a story... great job!!! 5/5! (now im gonna read the alternate ending)

So, i won't lie... you said you wrote raps so when i read this, i tried rapping it in my head. haha. but, i can't rap so that didn't really work. but either way, amazing poem.

"I seek help from others, but they don't have much to suggest."

i understand taht whole feeling... but i can honestly tellyou that someone out there knows just what to say to anything troubling you.