Aww...so sad...it almost made me cry...this is a beautifully written poem...keep up the good work...stay strong...5/5.

Very well written sad but understandable 5/5 from me

Awwwww..thts really sad...i lik it alot...the flow was really good....soo keep on writing..

This poem is really sad and heart-wrenching. You seem to capture it perfectly and it is beautfully put. Keep it up!

Take care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

Aaaaaaawwwww....SO sad but ABSOLUTELY wonderful...Keep up the good work. i LOVE ur poems

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Aww I loved the ending.. It was so sad... and so well thought out! Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Hey
this is such a GREAT poem!
you have done a really great job!
love mel

Awwwww this is really good, but sad. i like it a lot. it was really amazing. you got talent. keep writing!

Well i find it weird, it's mysteric, we coulnd't know why she is sad, it was weird, not bad atl all but weird

Aww sad poem and very well written
i loved the line
"Black makeup badly smudged"
it had great detail.
good work.

sophie:)

Jess, your poetry is becoming more mature after ever write. I am impressed with this piece. Well done, you are getting so much better in such a short period of time. That's what I love about reading other poems, it helps me learn. Awesome stuff!

Oh my gosh! Jessy! I hope this isn't in any way about you. Awe! It was so sad. But yet again it was so good, your flow was great, and your details were amazing. You're improving so much everytime I read your work! Great job, hun! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Uhhh It makes me so sick to my stomach knowing that there are so many who do this to themselves without even thinking of their loved ones, or thinking of their future that they have yet to experience. You have good descritption in this piece..I liked....hope it isn't true! Hang in there if it is!
Krissey

Wow such talent from such a young lady, well done, cant wait to read more 5/5 xx

Yes thanks for ur comment i do admit there s0me error in my poem.. maybe i will check it later coz i writen that w/out realizing i just write what comes in my mind.. i dont deny ur poems are good! keep on writing very nice!

:-0...*speechless*...very well articulated piece..very good description...i loved it!! absolutely loved it...5/5!!

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I love this poem. Its amazing. Great job!

Nice poem...its rythme is great..5-5

Awwwww... this poem really hit the spot i feel like i was there to witness what happend to the girl in this poem... i give u a 10/10 keep ^ the good work!!!

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Not to worry anyone (and not that anyone cares) but that reminds me of myself A LOT...except for the suicide part...uhm, yeah. anyway i really like this poem and your descriptive words are great :-)