by Amanda Aug 19, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She looks in the mirror, |
by Robie Lincer
This poem i loved! i loved the ending! like i said you put creativity in ur poems! excellent! |
I'm not sure why, but I didn't like this as much as the others you wrote... For some reason something about it just threw the poem away for me. But it did have a nice format and rhyming. If you tried to doing styles like an Ottava Rima I think you'd do well..Try it. |
by forgetmenot
Not brilliant!??? i thought this was realy gd! don't put yourself down!!! |